Week 10

I put my final comparison essay into www.wordandphrase.info. It shows that my FREQ RANGE

 1-500 is 71%, FREQ RANGE 501-3000 is 14%, and FREQ RANGE >3000 is 15%.

This result surprised me, because I didn't know that I can write less 75% frequent words and more than 15% academic words.  It is really good result for me. I am happy that I got improvement in my writing class. Before taking this writing class, I can only write a short essay with chaotic format and logic. However, I learn a lot from Bonnie. I am satisfied with my essay right now. I know my words and sentence still have a big space to improve.  I will change my daily language to more academic words in the future essay. It needs time to practice.And I think more practice more get.

Week 8
    

     I think biology is more important factors in shaping gender 

roles. "Men and Women differ in their genetic structure. Women 

have tow "X" chromosomes; Men have one "X" and "Y" 

chromosome.(HM and BBD,1985,PAP9)". Men and women have a 

basic difference base on the gene. They have been different since 

they exist. The culture factors can not change the biology factors. 

On the other hand, the biology can change our culture. The gene 

cause man more brave, stronger, and more "power". In the past,

man had more power than women. Men could control almost 

everything. Because of the gene, it causes man are aggressive. Even

though, men still are competitive  in today